Here is Daniel who is in third grade and he likes to play the clarinet . He likes to pick on Abraham at recess and others. His dad is a really famous actor and makes millions of dollars and his mom is in the army. He lives with his grandmother since his parents are away and also his cousins lived with him as well. He has been sad and lonely because he misses his parents and he feels alone at school because of it. His favorite TV show is spongebob squarepants and his favorite character is squidward tentacles because he plays the clarinet.
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Hey Allen! I loved the detail that you put into this post and the layers within. Do you like playing the clarinet as well? Can’t wait for more characters!
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Allan, I love that you were so specific with the details that you included about Daniel and the people around Daniel. I wish I was a famous person making millions of dollars haha. I wonder does Daniel like to play any specific sports at recess?
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I appreciate it and he plays a few at recess
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Hey Allen I love the character Daniel, he is so unique! I love how you gave us so much background information about Daniels family situation. Daniels dad is famous, so cool! And his mother is serving in the the army, wow! I really want to hear more about the last time Daniel saw his parents, and when will he see them next?
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He will see them soon
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I love how in depth your character description of Daniel is! It’s so interesting how his parents both have such different occupations, and that his time living with his grandmother and his cousins. I wonder why Daniel is picking on other kids, and how those relationships will develop more throughout the story?
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What I think and learned is a lot of kids want attention at home but never get it and that’s why he acts the way he is
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Wow! You have such good descriptions, it is so easy to imagine what you are talking about. I have some friends who are like Daniel, and sometimes he can get so sad. I keep wondering though, how much further will Daniel go to picking on other children?
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You will have to wait and see
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The description of this character is very in-depth. Do you enjoy the t.v. show Spongebob as well? Can’t wait to hear more.
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I enjoy it
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Allen, I love the attention to detail that you provided when creating this character! I wonder if him picking on others is due to all of the things that he has going on in his life, with his mom in the Army or his dad being famous? I can’t wait to hear more!
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Hi Allen! I love your description of Daniel and how you explain the situations at home that make him feel the way he does. You were so descriptive about Daniel. I can’t wait to learn more!
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Hi Allen! I love these blog posts about your characters. I feel like I can relate to Daniel because I also miss my parents while I’m at school. Will Daniel learn to be nice to others when he sees his parents again?
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Amazing description! I like the way you make Daniel feel like a relatable and very developed character! Do we know how long it has been since he has seen either of his parents?
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Hey Allen! I love your character Daniel. Does he like living with his grandmother? I know I would, my grandmother feeds me a lot of sweets.
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Hi Allen! Wow, I love the thought you put into this character. I feel like I know a lot about Daniel and his character even from this short description. In one of the comments you mentioned that because he may not be getting enough attention at home he acts out by picking on others like Abraham. I think this is a very thoughtful and accurate explanation to why Daniel may be picking on others the way he is. Nice work, Allen!
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Hey Allen, I like the way Daniel’s character is written and the symbolism behind it and think it is very realistic. I I look forward to learning more about him and how he fits into the story.
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I love how you related your character back to a piece of media. It was super creative to form your character off of these specific ideas! I also thought it was interesting that you established his parents’ careers and why Daniel’s home life is the way it is. I hope he finds happiness in his living situation!
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Hey Allen! I really liked reading about this character and all the details you gave! Why does he pick on Abraham and the other kids at recess? Can’t wait to hear about more characters!
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Hi, Allen! I love how you put in so much detail to bring your characters to life! I kind of relate to Daniel because I play clarinet as well and my dad used to be in the Army, so it’s really great to be able to make those connections! I hope he can make some really good friends at school so he can be less lonely. I’m excited to see what else you have in store!
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Hello Allen! I love reading your post. I wanted to play the clarinet in band class, but my band teacher told me I was better off playing the trombone.
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Holy cow dude! I feel like I’m just reading a book your descriptions are amazing. I can picture him in my head! Also if his dad is a really famous actor, who is he? Bob Ross? Bill Nye? Leonardo Dacpreo?
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Hey Allen, I love this story but dislike that Daniel bullies Abraham. Do you think he picks on Abraham because his mom is gone a lot because she is in the army? Missing a parent can be hard and also since the dad is famous, he may not be at home as much. Does Daniel bully Abraham for attention from others and his parents? Who is the famous dad?
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Hey Allen!
I love that Daniel plays an instrument! Do you play any instruments? Do you play soccer like the characters do?
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Hey Allen! Wow, this blog post is do detailed. I feel like I already know so much about Daniel. I love the show Spongebob Squarepants, my favorite character is Spongebob, who is your favorite character? I can’t wait for your next blog post! 🙂
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Hey Allen, Daniel’s character seems kind of sad because he misses his parents, which makes me think that may be why he has the tendency to bully other students. Does he get along with his cousins that he lives with, or is he mean to them too? Does he like that his dad is an actor and makes lots of money, even if it means he doesn’t get to see him very much?
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Hey Allen! I love that you’re making dynamic characters and we can start to see their motivations just from their descriptions!
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Hi Allen! I really loved the specific details that you put into your character Daniel. How would you say that you are similar to your character, and how are you different?
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Hi Allen! I enjoyed reading all of your detail about this character! Why is his name “Daniel the know it all”?
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Because of his personality
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I like how you gave your antagonist these emotional layers of backstory. It’ll be interesting to see how his emotional attachment issues play into his relationships at school as the story progresses. Also, it was nice to hear you talk about your characters in class tonight, thanks for coming in to share!
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Your welcome and There may be a cliffhanger with Phillip’s parents involved with Daniel
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Thank you for sharing this story with us, Allen! I love that you are incorporating Spongebob Squarepants and so many other fun details!
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